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Architect of Despair

Woe is me, my mood is sour,
My heart is heavy, and my mind a mess.
I've done it again, an act so dour,
My eagerness, naught but a source of distress.

Love is beautiful, but it's bite quite dire.
When, upon refusal, a hollowness to condone.
Intentions wonderful, but their recipient like stone.
My feelings like ash, swept from a dead fire.

Every time, like a badly-closed wound,
I bleed profusely, beyond compare.
What else should I expect, my fate is bound,
I am my own Architect of Despair.
If it comes as a surprise, then SURPRISE! As of late, I have been feeling a bit melancholy. Getting home from work today, I had the sudden urge to write something poetic. Strangely, this mostly came out without any outside influence. I DID have to look up a few synonyms, however.

As for what it is about, I am sure it'll be fairly obvious if you read it. It's not a TSS-length kind of thing, so enjoy!
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Levithion9538 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is sad yet shows what can and will or might become of those that share it. Bravo! Clap 
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!  This was actually my very first poem... and I am glad that I don't often write sad or depressing ones anymore.
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Levithion9538 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime and yes because if you do write sad poems it often shows how your feeling. And yes you did Amazing for your first!
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:blushes:  I am far too chipper these days to write sad unless someone requests it!
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Levithion9538 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't count on your stars poem to be sad. <3
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Levithion9538 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is true.
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it's going to be freaking magical!
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, that hurt. I love the wording on this, it really emphasizes the feelings being conveyed very well. I love it. :)
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you again! =) I am thankfully not in this state of mind anymore, but I keep this around as a reminder...
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